Write a visual analysis essay based on Gottfried Helnwein’s artwork(posted at the end of my essay), no historical information or any research need, just to analyze it based on what you see using the language of art such as focal point, linear perspective, cool & warm color…

I have already done with the essay, but could you help me to proofread it according to vocabulary, grammar and anything else to make it a high-quality essay, THANKS!!