Running Head: SAVING IN THE UNIVERSITY 1

Saving In The University

English Composition I (EH 1010) June 18, 2021

SAVING IN THE UNIVERSITY 2

Saving money in the university: How to save as a student in the university

Most university students spend their money carelessly and end up getting into debt without

a plan. Most students feel that they cannot save the pocket money given to them by their parents

and guardians for use in school. Students end up finishing university and having to start life from

scratch while it is not only possible to save money but also use the savings in starting a business or

making other small investments. Saving money for a campus student is not as hard as most people

think and is very doable. Students in universities can save their money by creating and sticking to a

student budget, sharing accommodation, and also checking on their eating habits.

One sure way to monitor spending is for students to create a budget for the finances that

one has. One reason people end up not having money on campus is that they struggle on a budget

and end up overspending their money on things like parties and hanging out with friends. Let us

say that a student receives money by their parents weekly and the amount they get is $200

monthly. The student can plan effectively for the amount. In the budget, the student can create a

budget at the beginning of the month to make sure the money is allocated to the various expenses.

The main expenses for a student will include the house rent, utilities, internet, groceries,

entertainment, home supplies, school expenses, clothes, personal effects, and other expenses. The

largest expense will be the house rent which would cost around $700 a month in a comfortable

house with all the needed amenities such as water, electricity, and internet (Popovich et al., 2020).

For the home supplies, personal effects, clothes the student can use $250 comfortably. The student

will allocate the money to all the expenses and have an allocation of $200 for miscellaneous and

emergencies. With the budget, a student will be able to control their spending habits by ensuring

Gregory Underwood
Use plural pronouns to replace plural antecedents and singular pronouns the same way. For example, “Someone who dropped out may not find online is learning is for them.” In that example, the singular “someone” is replaced by the plural “them.” Solution: replace “someone” with the plural “students.” For more see http://columbiasouthern.adobeconnect.com/pronounantecedent7/
Gregory Underwood
A comma is needed to separate nonessential elements (an element that is not necessary for the sentence to be complete) from the rest of the sentence in which it appears. For more on commas, see this resource: http://columbiasouthern.adobeconnect.com/commas7/ Last reminder
Gregory Underwood
This word is kind of vague. Can you replace it with a more precise word that more accurately conveys to your reader the idea you mean?
Gregory Underwood
Good concluding sentence
Gregory Underwood
A comma is needed to separate nonessential elements (an element that is not necessary for the sentence to be complete) from the rest of the sentence in which it appears. For more on commas, see this resource: http://columbiasouthern.adobeconnect.com/commas7/
Gregory Underwood
this seems like a great thesis
SAVING IN THE UNIVERSITY 3

they do not exceed their limits for the different expenses. In this case, the student can save $300

monthly aft