Final draft for paper.

There is draft 2 here.  Expand the draft 2 to 1500~1800 words

Need it in 2 days

  
REQUIREMENTS:
– Up to 1500-1800 words
– write the sub-claims at the beginning of body paragraph
– introduce the authors before citing their words
– you say that Neyret supports your claim but try not to use this language too much.