Final draft for paper.
There is draft 2 here. Expand the draft 2 to 1500~1800 words
Need it in 2 days
REQUIREMENTS:
– Up to 1500-1800 words
– write the sub-claims at the beginning of body paragraph
– introduce the authors before citing their words
– you say that Neyret supports your claim but try not to use this language too much.
