Part 1 is to circle or highlight the 20 mistakes in the letter. Part 2 is to provide corrections for the mistakes you identified. Proofreading/Editing Assignment (20 points): Part 1: Circle/highlight the twenty mistakes in the letter on Page 3. Number each mistake identified. Part 2: Show the correction for each mistake identified. 1. Mistake: ridge Correction: Ridge 2. Mistake: Correction: 3. Mistake: Correction: 4. Mistake: Correction: 5. Mistake: Correction: 6. Mistake: Correction: 7. Mistake: Correction: 8. Mistake: Correction: 9. Mistake: Correction: 10. Mistake: Correction: 11. Mistake: Correction: 12. Mistake: Correction: 1|Page 13. Mistake: Correction: 14. Mistake: Correction: 15. Mistake: Correction: 16. Mistake: Correction: 17. Mistake: Correction: 18. Mistake: Correction: 19. Mistake: Correction: 20. Mistake: Correction: 2|Page 192 ridge Court Troy, AL 36082 May 7th, 2019 Mr. John Williams, Director of Hunan Resources Patterson Federal Credit Union P. O. Box 4296 Birmingham, AT 35233 RE: Credit Union Marketing Specialist Position (Job Posting #831491) Dear Mr. William: My successes in attracting new Troy Trojan Club members would translate well into meeting the requirements of your Credit Union Marketing Special position. I am eager to speak with you by phone or in person to learn more about the position and explain how I can contribution. During my nearly 3 years with Trojan Athletics I have had experience with many of the responsibilities you are seeking, including marketing to increase membership; tracking the success of marketing activities, and delivering presentations to potential members. I have assisted in gaining new Trojan Club members by helping develope marketing campaigns with many of the techniques you are seeking; including event marketing, mailings, and online social networking. One of my most successful marketing campaigns occurred lest year when I was given the responsibility of developing membership amoung recent graduates and university students. I developed both mailings and emailings and an online social networking campaign that resulted in 35 new members. Our Associate Athletic Director recognized this as a successfull startup campaign. During my time working with Trojan Athletics I have been given more and more responsibilities due to my leadership, initiative, creativity, and performance. I can make these same contributions to the Latterson Federal Credit Union. Please call Me at your convenience to arrange an interview. You can reach me at my mobile phone (334-678-1234) between 9 a.m. and 6 p.m. Daily. Sincerely: Mary Brown 3|Page Purchase answer to see full attachment Tags: business mistakes Learning Environment User generated content is uploaded by users for the purposes of learning and should be used following our company’shonor code & terms of service.
