Chapters SixteenEighteen
Sometimes how you say something is just as important as what you say. How an author uses words is referred to as style. An authors style is important because it helps the author convey the theme.
Diction is an authors word choice. Authors carefully select their words to tell their story, but they also vary their sentence structure, sentence length, and word type.
Here are some things to look for when evaluating style:
Parallel structure/parallelism: Patterns of repeated clause or phrase types or verb forms.
Ex: He had been prepared to lie, to bluster, to remain sullenly unresponsive; but, reassured by the good-humoured intelligence of the Controllers face, he decided to tell the truth, straightforwardly.
Repetition: Repeated words or phrases
Ex: But he manifests himself in different ways to different men.
Emotional/shocking Language: Strong words designed to pull at emotions
Ex: Beautys attractive, and we dont want people to be attracted by old things. We want them to like the new ones.
Figurative Language: Language not meant to be taken literally
Ex: those human maggots swarming round Lindas bed of death, the endlessly repeated face of his assailants.
Allusion: Reference to history or literature
Ex: Goats and monkeys! (a direct allusion to Shakespeares Othello)
Punctuation: Unusual or carefully chosen punctuation
Part I: Identifying Style
Directions: For each of the excerpts below, label the style used and describe the effect of the style choice on the reader.
1. But Bernard would not be cheered; without answering, without even looking at Helmholtz, he went and sat down on the most uncomfortable chair in the room, carefully chosen in the obscure hope of somehow deprecating the wrath of the higher powers. (Ch. 16)
Analyzing St yle
Style Choice:
Effect:
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2. For the sake of the labourers; it would be sheer cruelty to afflict them with excessive leisure. (Ch. 16)
3. The worlds stable now. People are happy; they get what they want, and they never want what they cant get. Theyre well off; theyre safe; theyre never ill; theyre not afraid of death; theyre blissfully ignorant of passion and old age; theyre plagued with no mothers or fathers; theyve got no wives, or children, or lovers to feel strongly about; theyre so conditioned that they practically cant help behaving as they ought to behave. (Ch. 16)
4. It isnt only art thats incompatible with happiness; its also science. Science is dangerous; we have to keep it most carefully chained and muzzled. (Ch. 16)
5. Our Ford himself did a great deal to shift the emphasis from truth and beauty to comfort and happiness. Mass production demanded the shift. Universal happiness keeps the wheels steadily turning; truth and beauty cant. (Ch. 16)
6. And Ive got plenty more, Mustapha Mond continued, resuming his seat. A whole collection of pornographic old books. God in the safe and Ford on the shelves. (Ch. 17)
Style Choice:
